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by theauctioneer
Wed Jul 08, 2020 1:39 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

I really like this, especially the "boxes on boxes" bit. Very interesting harmonies too. Some constructive thoughts which I hope are useful: 1. Think about the dynamic range across the whole track - the piano seems like a constant volume throughout but I think could create more interest by introduc...
by theauctioneer
Wed Jul 01, 2020 1:53 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

it kinda sounded like someone went to goldsmiths and doesn't know what to do next... reminded me of a friend's song writing -- who studied music -- actually, though i couldn't say why... similar goals i'd guess ive never actually gone through any formal music education besides some standard piano +...
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 5:59 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

IEC wrote:
Tue Jun 30, 2020 5:57 pm
sounds kinda like.... florence and the machine? or something along those lines? i guess thats a compliment though! :)
hey, thanks! i don't actually listen to florence and the machine much but some ppl have mentioned this before lol
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 5:45 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

I think it sounds good. On the production side the vocal might be a little too dominant in the mix with the beat being somewhat too subdued. Also the beat could include some variation and movement to support the lyrical intent. It's a little rigid. So that the music interplays with your vocals a bi...
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 5:23 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

It's got legs. I like your voice. I think the song's written (it's a good song) but maybe the arrangement and production isn't finished? Part of your melody reminds me of a song by Lera Lynn. If you listen to Lera Lynn then careful! If you don't it's just coincidence, all is good. Both are nice mel...
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 4:58 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

i think the piano / melody fits the singer well. the lyrics i could work out i found a bit annoying, but i'm a crank is there anything specific about them you didn't like? i don't wanna write music that people find annoying haha i found that certain phrases got stuck in my head, and -- while i thin...
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 4:49 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

vqlk wrote:
Tue Jun 30, 2020 4:41 pm
i think the piano / melody fits the singer well. the lyrics i could work out i found a bit annoying, but i'm a crank
is there anything specific about them you didn't like? i don't wanna write music that people find annoying
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 4:47 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

Re: any advice or critique is welcome :)

sparood wrote:
Tue Jun 30, 2020 4:37 pm
This is pretty good!
thanks, i appreciate it!
by theauctioneer
Tue Jun 30, 2020 12:58 pm
Forum: Your Tunes Here
Topic: any advice or critique is welcome :)
Replies: 16
Views: 322

any advice or critique is welcome :)

i'm working on a track atm that i quite like but i'm very new to producing and mixing songs. here's the link to it, it's called 'for example': https://soundcloud.com/the-auctioneer/for-example/s-WIhBGQsdtWL i'm not really looking for any criticism on my voice bc i already know i have a long way to g...

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